CBDPC 2005 with my critique
of each shot
(entered in Open Film Macro) Chris Simmons 5/28/2005 |
Catalyptic(?) Shrimp
What's good:
Focus, lighting, position of the
shrimp
What's bad:
The shrimp blends in to the background,
the shrimp needs to fill more of the frame. The overhead(righthand) strobe
could be moved a little further away (half a stop). So the straight ahead(lefthand)
strobe would get rid of some of the shadow on the side of the shrimp
facing the camera.
Other Notes:
This was shot at close to 1-to-1. The shrimp is only about 0.75" tall.
To fill more of the frame, I would have to use a 200mm macro lens with a
+4 diopter which might have been close to impossible to do on anything
except a perfectly flat day.